Sinful Sunday Flash Fiction Week # 44 Results

The results are in! Here’s what judge Krystel H had to say!

I cannot tell you how hard it was to choose! I lost count how many times I read through them! Such great entries! I absolutely enjoyed doing this, so thank you for the opportunity. And now the results!

Honorable Mention #1: Helena C.
This entry tore at me. You can feel her want for him, how much she desires him to be there. And you can’t help but wonder where he has gone, and why he isn’t there. I want to know what promise did he break? Did he break her heart? The emotion is very nicely done.

Honorable Mention #2: Elle T.
I love how you can see how he notices everything, every small detail of her and can’t help but desire her, want her. I think she desired him just as much as he did her.

Honorable Mention #3: Everydaybella
I love how he struggles with his desire for her, knowing it could bring him down, but yet, at the same time knowing he can’t hold back. Captured desire beautifully.

Runner up: Louise Clark
It was honestly hard to chose between the winner, and this one, both so very good! I loved this one just about the same.. I loved how you see the torment through his desire for her, his want. I love how he finally gives in, knowing he just has to, he has no other choice but to.

Winner: Jami Denise
I loved this entry, it was demanding, gritty, even dirty in the most delicious of ways all the while dripping of pure sin. Teasing up until the last very last word. This is one I wish was longer than the 200 words allowed.

 

Great job everyone! The winners may now grab their badges! Thanks to everyone who participated, and see you all next week!

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