Sinful Sunday Flash Fiction Week # 46 Results

The results are in! Here’s what judge Tinsley Warren had to say!

I can’t tell you how excited I am to have been able to do this this week! Thank you to everyone who participated, you guys are all fantastic! I’m not worthy!

@lisabilbrey
I really liked how vulnerable she was in this and how she seemed to be embracing the situation head on. Prom is that magical time and I think this showed them getting swept up into it so well. They embraced the moment.

@annalund2011
I really like how you interpreted the prompts. Normally people use virgin for the girl, but you didn’t. I like that she was the one educating him!

@reaganphillips5
I really liked how you set the scene with where they were at. I could totally see everything happening. Loved the playful teasing banter, and the end! I hope he follows through!

@geekchic12
Honorable Mention
If everyone’s first time was like that, we would all be so blessed! I liked how you really described the moment so well and loved how they both found out how much they wanted each other.

@quinnskylark
Honorable Mention
I loved the imagery in this. I loved how it was all explained as a garden, I thought that was so unique and such a beautiful read.

@chocaholic12345
Runner-Up
I loved the desire you could feel right away. There was no questioning where this was going and you were so ready for it. I liked how he was the inexperienced one too, and that she was the one ready to show him!

@melfin80
Winner
I loved how you used the picture prompt! You really made the reader feel like they were in that fort with the two of them! And how the story came full circle with the kids, loved it!

 

Great job everyone! The winners may now grab their badges! Thanks to everyone who participated, and see you all next week!

 

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